tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7848838938314174562.post8692601276138059907..comments2023-03-27T04:58:16.351-07:00Comments on Akela Hi Sahi: meri kalam ,meri gazal ,mere hunar ki vajah kya hai.?Anand Rathorehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14768779067635315825noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7848838938314174562.post-56188559180857804892012-11-14T19:54:28.496-08:002012-11-14T19:54:28.496-08:00.
गुमसुम है दिल इन दिनों वज़ह क्या है
तू नहीं ....<br /> <br /><b>गुमसुम है दिल इन दिनों वज़ह क्या है <br />तू नहीं है वज़ह , फिर वज़ह क्या है </b> <br />अच्छा लिखा है<br /><b> आनंद राठौर जी </b> <br /><br /><b> </b>प्रयास करें , <br /> अब तो हिंदी में लिखना बहुत आसान है …<br /><br /><br /><b>शुभकामनाओं सहित… </b> <br />राजेन्द्र स्वर्णकारRajendra Swarnkar : राजेन्द्र स्वर्णकारhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18171190884124808971noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7848838938314174562.post-19005622375561160702012-11-08T21:04:42.828-08:002012-11-08T21:04:42.828-08:00thank you Mugdha... your added lines are beautiful...thank you Mugdha... your added lines are beautiful ... welcome hai ji... Anand Rathorehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14768779067635315825noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7848838938314174562.post-44514480163931387282012-11-08T13:31:47.174-08:002012-11-08T13:31:47.174-08:00Khoobsoorati se alfazon ko bayan karne ki;
Vajah k...Khoobsoorati se alfazon ko bayan karne ki;<br />Vajah kya hai?<br />Khoye hue armaano ko fir tatolne ki;<br />Vajah kya hai?<br /><br />Bahut khoob, the beauty of your poem is the simplicity of words! I just wrote another two lines.. hope you wont mind!<br /><br />Cheers<br />MugdhaMugdha's Twilight Zonehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00376821354892365432noreply@blogger.com